am i good enough to become a rapper?
Question by Charlie: am i good enough to become a rapper?
im 15 and have only been rapping literally for about a year, every single day i am improving durastically and i have honestly every received minor criticism on what i rap about, but thats changed so i just want ur opinions on my raps i have posted below, and note i did not spend days on these i literally wrote them in about 30mins each. if you dont like the style of the rap feel free to read my others in my previous questions and i have a wide range of styles from slow tempo rapping like the game or wayne(who i hate) but i inspire to be like my idol eminem by just dropping a bomb in the middle of the verse, so please rate:)
only 15 years old, and yet my storys untold
yh its too thin for your skull, even thou the writings in BOLD
soo im just letting you kno, that im running this rap show
and now opras in the cold, and her phone calls are on hold
pussing splitting lyric hitting im on a mission to grow
why dont you listen the script is written i am the next for the throne
pussy licking, weave squishing so just sign the petition
that there aint enough space for two to be fishing in this boat
when your slipping im ripping your superstecion thats missing the fact im putting food in the kitchen, my tonail clippings are flipping because the force of you tripping is like a dick when its stiffing because a fit ***** is stripping and licking something to explicit to mention
shes a ********** with perky lips to be kissing ,
my dick when it comes out to PLAY, SHAKESPEARE would be wishing,
and now her chin is just dripping of a liquid worth sipping
so im ending this **** with a smile from spitting
like what she was doing when she had finished her drinking!
your not a rapper nor a player, your a rhymers prick hater
a rabbit with no teeth, a sweet gummy bear demonstrater
im the games rap surveyor, flows soo deep like a crater
i see those other wack rappers, ill have to deal with them later
they just piling up ****, im ******* covered in layers
im the creator dictator of this rap game thats greater than technology, like phones with translaters or this world full of haters, i guess i am the inflator
the waitor instater emcee slayer say a prayor bigger than the mayor, spit fire sprayer teeth decayer conveyer im turning mad eve-ry dayer im exploding on this earth for every yard every acre, its contageous outrageous how this system can play us, from a talent on stages too a sell out with fat pay checks but im keeping it real until my soul will just lay rest, so im ending this **** without a book, just a spray yes..
Best answer:
Answer by latj
No. You are 15 and everyone knows that these lyrics would never get used or published by anyone. Not only are they entirely too sexy and perverse that they are silly but the metaphors aren’t good, there isn’t enough rhyming and you aren’t using the 16 bar theory.
You can say anything you want about what I said but I’m known for giving extremely honest and real opinions. This is TRASH.
I would rate is 2/10…I would give you a 2 just for taking the time to write it. If you seriously want to write RHH lyrics then come back to down to earth and write about something other than sex. I understand that your hormones are raging and you are at a tumultuous time in your tween-hood” but this is clearly ridiculous.
Peace, Love &Happiness
EDIT: Be glad someone didn’t report you for posting this crap…it’s against the Terms of Service…read them before you post stuff like this next time
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