Does this sound like a good start to a movie?
Question by Ian: Does this sound like a good start to a movie?
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Ian McPhie
[we start with a Birds eye view shot over a small town. We zoom in to a school building. We go in to the school building in the middle of an English class]
Charlie (teacher): So now that we know the rhyming pattern I would like you all to write me a sonnet.
Whole Class: [groans]
Charlie: It isn’t very hard to do all you have to do is make sense and rhyme.
[everyone quickly starts writing]
Ian: Oh yeah this is totally easy! Charlie I have my sonnet.
Charlie: Read it for us Ian.
Ian: Must write a sonnet and make it sound good. So many things I would rather do. Don’t want to do it but no that I should. I would rather watch TV and sleep too. If I don’t do this then Charlie will be mad. Still my mind wanders to whats in the fridge. Leftover spaghetti would make me feel glad. I am at line eight I am passed a ridge. It is eight lines down and its six more to go. Maybe this won’t be so hard after all. Maybe I will catch my favorite show. Maybe I will even go play football. Who am I kidding I never play ball. My sonnet is the most awesome of all.
Charlie: Very good Ian.
Ian: Thank you Charlie.
Charlie: You know I am going to call you McPhie from now on. That is the coolest last name I have ever had in my classes.
Ian: OK cool.
Charlie: OK, does anybody else have a poem for me.
Shelby: I do, it is a haiku.
Charlie: OK go for it.
Shelby Click clack click clack click. Those are noises my car makes. Clack click clack click clack.
Charlie: Uh. OK then anybody else.
Tanner: I have a haiku too.
Charlie: OK lets here it Tanner.
Tanner: Wait haiku’s are usually about nature right?
Charlie: Yes they are.
Tanner: OK. Nature is boring. It is just a little dirt. I find it so lame.
Charlie: OK that was good I especially like when it ended.
Maddy: Hey guys! Guess what.
Tanner: what?
Maddy: Squirrel!
Charlie: OK? That was a little bit random. Lets try to be a bit more on topic now OK?
Maddy: OK sorry.
Shelby: Hey guys did you know cows always point north.
[whole class bursts into laughter including Charlie]
Truman: I have a poem that I analyzed Charlie. It is the Soviet union anthem.
Charlie: Again Truman? You always have to bring the Soviet Union or Communism when we do work.
Ian: Gosh Truman stop being so communist.
[Bell Rings]
Charlie: Come on guys hurry why are you still here?
Best answer:
Answer by James
Not sure where this movie is heading to at all, the only problem i see is,” You always have to bring the Soviet Union or Communism when we do work.” lol, what grade is this?
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