pls read my review about this movie make any changes any more suggestions?
Question by Miley Nick: pls read my review about this movie make any changes any more suggestions?
MOVIE REVIEW 17 AGAIN. WHO SAYS YOU ARE YOUNG ONLY ONCE.
Major Genre Comedy
Running Time: 98 minutes
Worldwide Gross $ 115,192,912
Cast, Zac Efron
Leslie Mann
Thomas Lennon
Michelle Trachtenberg
Sterling Knight
Melora Hardin
Allison Miller
Hunter Parrish
At 17 Mike O’Donell (Zac Efron) was on top of the world; he was the star of his high school basketball team, and if he wins the basketball game .He is in for a college scholarship. But when the game is on Mike decides to leave the game and asks Scarllet (his girlfriend) to marry him which she does. During their marriage, Mike could only whine about the life he lost because he married her. So she throws him out. And when he loses his job, he returns to the only place he’s happy at – his old high school. And while looking at his high school photo, a janitor asks him if he wishes he could be 17 again and he says yes. One night while driving he sees the janitor on a bridge and apparently jumps in and he goes after him. When he returns to his friend, Ned’s house, where he has been staying, he sees that he is 17 again. He decides to take this opportunity to get the life he lost. He resolves to go back to his school where his friend Ned acts like his dad and then he gets admission in the high school. He finds out that his son Alex (Sterling Knight) is being bullied by big guys’ .Once again he has the opportunity to play in the basket ball team and get his scholarship and a good job. But by going back to his high school he realizes that the reason for him to become 17 again was not to get his lost job or scholarship but to appreciate what he already have.
pls tell me something more to write at the end or read it any mistakes any thing more i can add
on the whole the movie is good and as summer is here gather ur friends and watcg this awesome movie
Best answer:
Answer by April
Overall, it sounds good (I did not see movie but heard about it). However, you have a lot of grammar mistakes and best thing to do is type this in Word and then run spell check because spell check will help you catch the grammar mistakes also (if you are writing this for school, teachers will notice this).
-Scarlett
-bullied by big guys
– sentences “So she throws him out” and “…scholarship and a good job” could be part of the sentence which follows each of them
– what he already has
– commas are either missing or wrong in misc places
Good review overall
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