Q&A: a sequel to a movie?

Question by aprilbby: a sequel to a movie?
okay, so, my friend and i wrote the sequel to the cmt movie ‘broken bridges’. its going to be in the summer when theyre in court, pressing charges against wyatt. meantime, angel and dixie have stayed in armour springs. dixie met two friends; cheyenne and dawn; whom each have their own stories to tell. anyway, bo and angel decide to get married. at the wedding, dixie meets a boy named chris and they begin to fall in love. all girls have a boyfriend, and really, they are made for each other. after the teens get into trouble one night, bo has to step up and take them on tour with him. after the boys team up with one old friend, the girls break up with the boys and it all goes bad. meanwhile, back at home, angel is running for mayor [just like she wanted to] and she carshed the car, going into a coma. the docs find out that she is pregnant as well. the tour [bos] is cancelled and he has to go back home to be with angel. in the end, everyone realizes life is too short and you cant waste it. in the end, theres a suprise that youll never see coming. my friend and i wrote all original songs and everything to go along with it, so, would you watch this if it came to the movies? does anyone know what other steps to take to make this into a movie?

cast
bo- toby ketih
angel-kelly preston
dixie-lindsey haun
chris-joe jonas
cheyenne-meee (april erickson)
dawn-abby parker
zac-nick jonas
tweedlebug-kevin jonas
alissa-taylor swift
jake-burt reynolds
dixie rose-tess harper
loretta-ana maria horsford
wyatt-josh henderson

Best answer:

Answer by Frosty
Perhaps hire an editor (or convince a peer editor) to go over it.

I wouldn’t watch it, most likely because it’s not a genre I’m into – but I do know plenty of people that would.

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