Some feedback for these characters?

Question by Checkers- the -Wolf: Some feedback for these characters?
Only got one reply for this question but…oh well, here goes… just some characters from an upcoming Avatar story no big deal.But could use some feedback:

Tess Henderson- Mostly runs errands such as getting coffee for example. Tess is a typical red head and part time journalist from Chicago.She’s rather even tempered and surprisingly gets along with Parker Selfridge. When she’s not on the job, Tess writes short stories and reads ‘Digital photography for dummies’ Often times Tess starts up a conversation when things get quiet; which has worked a few times. Interests: flowers, kittens, B.L.T. sandwiches, playing scrabble and doing crossword puzzles. Actress of choice- Cassidy Freeman(Tess Mercer-Smallville season 8-9)

Gen- Found wandering outside the fence, Gen’s parents were taken in and shipped to earth. Some time later Gen was born at a wildlife reserve outside of Tokyo. Having spent most of his life around humans he’s rather friendly towards them. Gen’s name is actually ‘Gin’ which is Japanese for silver but due to a typo on his I.D. tag his name is spelled with an ‘E’ in the middle instead of an ‘I’. Gen’s stripes are also more silver/gray than dark blue, his hair is diluted black; he also has bi-color eyes. His left eye is blue and his right one is yellow; he also speaks both Japanese and English. Though he might look scary he’s been described as being an ‘overgrown house cat’. Interests: Running, shrimp, watching the sunset, dragonflies and doing word search. Actor of choice-Jackie Chan

Mara- Unlike Gen’s parents Mara’s are ‘domestic'(i.e. like dogs, cats,etc…). Born at a kennel in White plains, NY, Mara has been around humans since she was only a few minutes old. Although she’s been mistreated by some of her handlers. As a result she is afraid of people and will either run with her tail between her legs or growl. Mara is mostly on the quiet side but once she’s gotten to know certain people she will speak up and enjoys being rubbed behind her ears. Though Mara has black hair and yellow eyes one thing makes her stand out is she has spots like a leopard instead of stripes. Her ears also flop instead of standing up.Mara also has a tendency to chase her tail. Though she is rather jumpy at times she’s somewhat even tempered and quiet for the most part. Interests: Watching the sunrise, crickets, steak and playing checkers.
Actress of choice-Sabrina Labeauf (The Cosby show)

Rita Makaba(Pronounced ‘Ma-kay-ba’)- Like Mara, Rita’s parents are domestic; born and raised in Southern California. Although they interacted with humans on a daily basis, Rita and her parents weren’t allowed to go ut in public. When she got older Rita took a course in para legal. Rita’s eyes are green and her hair is black as well as her ears. She and Mara also have paw print shaped brand marks on their upper left arms(basically they were branded). When excited or happy she wags her tail(like a dog). Rita is easygoing but has her moments where she ‘tells it like it is’ she also likes dogs. Interests: Dogs, watching TV, walking on the beach and chocolate(tried it once). Actress of choice- Tichina Arnold(Everybody hates Chris)

Richer- A red and white blue eyed siberian husky owned by Norm Spellman. Richer is a show dog from Sna Francisco but hasn’t been to a dog show in a while. He’s a friendly, outgoing and playful young dog but once in a while trips over himself or gets his collar caught on something like a hook for example. Although he is a husky he prefers sitting on the couch over pulling a sled. Interests: Fetch, watching TV, milk-bones and listening to Ray Charles albums. Voiced by: Cedric the Entertainer(he’s done several movies including Maurice the lemur in Madagascar)

That’s just a few but could use some feedback, another character that’s up for consideration is listed below:

Kona(At first it was a nickname but then it stuck after a while), she mostly goes by Kona since almost anybody she meets claims her real name is ‘a mouthful to pronounce’. Kona is also the dominant female/leader of the eastern sea clan(the one in the pink dashiki in the scene where the group is introduced). Though Kona is pretty laid back she does manage to keep a straight face when she needs to. She’s friends with Awakey(aka the horse clan leader). Kona has also taken a liking to Raggae singers such as Bob Marley, Sean Paul and Shaggy as well as Patti Labelle, due to listening to Norm’s Ipod(more than once).Parker Selfridge and a few others sometimes call her ‘Pink panther’ mostly as a joke. Interests: Hiking, walking on the beach, sleeping, chocolate(got a hold of a hersey bar) and dogs. Actress of choice- Dawnn Lewis(A different world)

Still don’t know about adding Kona to the storyline but she’s not the only character being considered. But could use some feedback on the ones here.

What do you think?

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Answer by Anthonio XD
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