What do you think of the beginning of this movie?

Question by George: What do you think of the beginning of this movie?
HI, I made the beginning of a movie, its not finished (and far from it), but my friend and I are hoping to send it into a film festival contest and try to win some cash (unlikely)!! but dont worry, were not greedy people, we make the movies for fun! the cash would just be great going towards a movie! having a couple thousand bucks! So please give any constructive critisizm! good, bad, anything. I personally think we did pretty good for 16 year olds. Please keep in mind that this is only the first 3 mins of what will be about a 20-30 min movie. thanks for the help!
http://youtube.com/watch?v=TyE7wWeEGUo

Best answer:

Answer by crash
I really don’t know much about making a movie, but I thought it was pretty good editing. I like the fading/dissolving technique in the beginning. Overall I would say keep up the good work, as practice makes perfect!

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