please, may you proof- read my homework? thanx?

Question by rsgino7: please, may you proof- read my homework? thanx?
Radio Script

Samira:
Welcome everyone; are you a big fan of Charlie Chaplin? [Music] Would you do ANYTHING to see him perform?

Santiago:
He is performing in Toronto tomorrow. So you better get out of your chair because tickets are almost….sold out! Now we have a special report from our news reporter, Jordan McGuire.

Jordan:
Thank you. One of the worst disasters Toronto has ever seen could be on its way! A blizzard is approaching…visibility is absolutely zero! The volume of the snow is covering everything. Even our cameraman looks like a snowman…

Santiago:
Jordan? … Jordan? It seems like we have lost our signal, folks. We will be back after this commercial.

[Let it snow, let it snow, let it snow…]

Samira:
Great, we are back. From Toronto, with an update on the possible blizzard and disaster unfolding there as we speak, here’s Jordon.

Jordan:
Well thank you. It is absolutely freezing out here! [Freezing sound] I can’t stand this blizzard!

[Wind/snowstorm sounds]

Jordan:
We will have more information with our corresponded, Aaron. Now, Aaron what can you tell us more about the blizzard?

Aaron:
We’ll only really watch of we what already know. Details are vey, very sketchy. There is almost the sense down—-downtown, in only Toronto down behind me. Just as there is completely closed off as the secure workers try to do their job.

Jordan:
I see, now when will this snowstorm end?

Aaron:
It can end anytime. The snowstorm is pretty harsh. We cannot say… (how should I end this sentence?)

Best answer:

Answer by ruth4526
We cannot say what damage it has caused. Nor can we tell of any fatalities.

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