how can i improve this skit?
Question by sandra: how can i improve this skit?
NO SWEAT FASHIONS SKIT/COMMERCIAL
dominique: do you have over excessive perspiration problems?
haley:do you get those not so hot pit stains under your shirt?
dominique: do people talk about you because sweat starts to seep through your shirt when its really hot?
haley: well here’s a little tip on how to get rid of the humiliation
dominique: NO SWEAT FASHIONS! no sweat fashions is a tank shaped piece of fabric designed hygienist Charlene Bryant and scientist Kenny Williams it absorbs sweat and dries it before it has a chance to come through your shirt.
haley: now i know you thinking why this product is better than the others why ours is the one to use.
dominique:so we decided to give one away for free so someone can witness how great it works!
haley: so lets bring out jeannae worthem
dominique:hey jeannae glad to have you here
Jeannae: thanks its great to be here
haley:so Jeannae i understand that you were made fun of alot because you would have to go to school knowing that at the end of the day ,you would get made fun of?
jeannae: yeah because when it was reallly hot ,i would start to sweat and my shirt would be soaking wet
dominique:and people woud tease you for that reason
Jeannae:yes but now they have nothing to talk about because my no sweat fashions tank has changed my life. i just wear it under the shirt im wearing and by the end of the day my shirt is still dry
haley:so call 626-249-3848 to recieve a no sweat fashions tank in natural,white,or balck color.and jeannae would you be happen to wearing one write now?
jeannae:yes here is what it looks like (show tank)
dominique: so call 626-249-3848! thats 626-249-3848 and call quick because they are selling fast
all together: and remember staying cool is no sweat
NOTE TO YAHOO MEMBERS AND NON MEMBERS THIS IS NOT A REAL NUMBER this is just a pretend script
additional info for script:you can purchase a tank from the store arrow heart
Best answer:
Answer by Lissy
Just an idea:
Pretend that Dominique and Haley are on a talk show, talking to each other, and then Jeannae is a guest =)
What do you think? Answer below!
