can you please proof- read my homework? thank you?
Question by 154: can you please proof- read my homework? thank you?
Samira:
Welcome everyone; are you a big fan of Charlie Chaplin? Would you do ANYTHING to see him perform?
Santiago:
Well he is performing in Toronto tomorrow. So you better get out of your chair because tickets are almost sold out! Now we have a special report form our news reporter, Jordan McGuire.
Jordan:
Thank you. I am right now experiencing one of the worst disasters in Toronto! A hurricane is approaching… smoke raises. I can barely breathe now, I can’t see. It’s a total catastrophe. It’s really bad. It’s black!
Santiago:
Hello… Jordan are you okay? Oh… no we lost connections!
Samira:
We will be right back after this song.
[Song: Titanic]
[Noises approaches]
Santiago:
Yeah… we are back. Now back to Jordan.
(this is what i have so far. It’s supposed to be a radio script. Is it interesting? what else should i add? Thanx form ur help can u please proof read it now?)
Best answer:
Answer by Queen Annie
i think its perfectly all right. i proof read and didn’t find any mistakes. Good luck for your homework. Hope you get good grade.
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