Help me with my resume please! Does it looks ok?Please, help me to make it better.?

Question by : Help me with my resume please! Does it looks ok?Please, help me to make it better.?
Alexander XXXXXXX
XXX Bratislavskaya str., XXXXMobile +7 (9XX) XXX-XXXX
Moscow, Russia, XXXXX
Email: aXXXXXX@XXXXXX.com
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OBJECTIVE__________________________
To obtain an internship in IT programming, prove my potential, upgrade my knowledge and grow with the developing organization for Summer, 2010.
PROFILE
I am energetic, dependable student with academic experience in mathematics, programming and computer science.
PROFESSIONAL GOALS
Include continuing to grow in leadership and knowledge, excel in innovative technology application, interact and share with team members and colleagues, and develop world-class solutions to real world challenges.

EDUCATION____________________________________________
Moscow State University of Applied Biotechnology, Moscow, Russia
Bachelor of Science (Specialist) in Engineering, July 2008
Major: Engineer of meat and meat products technology.

Moscow State University, Moscow, Russia
Faculty of Computational Mathematics and Cybernetics,
Bachelor of Science (Specialist) in Applied Mathematics and Informatics, expected July 2012
Major: Mathematician, Systems Programmer.

TECHNICAL SKILLS___________________________________________
Operating Systems: Unix, Windows, Linux
Languages: C/C++, Pascal, Assembler (in progress)
Software: MS Word, MS Excel, MS PowerPoint, MS Access, Adobe After Effects,
Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Premiere Pro, Free Pascal, Microsoft Visual Studio 2008,
GNU Compiler Collection

EXPERIENCE_______________________________________________________
Full-time job, Russian Ice Hockey Federation, Moscow, Russia
Professional sportsmen, Ice Hockey linesman of Russian Championship among the teams of the
High League conducted by Russian Ice Hockey Federation July 2004 – April 2009
-Officiated on games

Part-time job, Russian Roller Hockey Federation, Moscow, Russia October 2006 – August 2008
Competitions Department manager,
Chief of committee of refereeing RRHF
-Accepted demands on participation in tournaments
-Conducted statistics, documentation of competitions, appointed referees
-Planned and conducted summer camps for referees and children

PERSONAL_________________________________INTERESTS______________________________
Date of Birth: September 26, 1986 Play the piano
Nationality: Russian Like ice hockey
Gender: Male Enjoy making movies
Marital Status: Single English language

Languages Known: English (IELTS test 6.5 points certificate, Middle advanced) and Russian

Best answer:

Answer by Ken B
I think that right after your objective, you should list your skills and abilities, like programming, team building, judgment…., take the education and put it last, leave out the piano playing and hobbies. Under your experience, put the experiences that you’ve had that are relative to the employment that you are seeking.

Leave off gender, marital status, hobbies, birthday, Good Luck!

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