how’s this for the beginning of an entry for a contest on who can write the best ‘dumb fanfiction’?
Question by music = life = love: how’s this for the beginning of an entry for a contest on who can write the best ‘dumb fanfiction’?
It’s a contest on storywrite.com, for the ‘best dumb fanfiction’, so this is what I started with (just so you know I’m NOT an elsie, AT ALL! lol)
so please evaluate? thanks!
The picture stared at me. My personal heaven. I remembered with a cherishing pride the fifteen minutes I’d spent making sure it lay perfectly flat against the wall, the tape all but invisible.
Every time I look into Edward’s eyes, I thought drawlingly, romantically, I see the pure, perfect love in his, staring back at me, and I imagine him whispering, Elsie, my love, sleep, you are the only one who has ever touched my heart… Like he said to Bella in Eclipse, the most amazing, romantic book in the world. My mind flashed to page 85 in Breaking Dawn, and I imagined myself with Edward in Bella’s place, and couldn’t help the girlish squeal that escaped me as I pictured his divine face. I ran and skipped around the house, humming bella’s lullaby and imagining him with me in the meadow, whispering in his velvet voice into my ear.
Elsie, you are my life now, my love, Elsie, sleep, I’ll sing to you all night, Elsie, I worry everyday for your safety, I will do anything for you, make you any promise, you are everything and I cannot live without you.
Ah, sweet vampires. I flipped open the top of my laptop, decorated with ‘twilight, the movie’ stickers. As I opened my email, the sexy, velvet voice of Robert Pattinson reached my ears, emitting from the pink shiny speakers that were muffled by being covered with yet more stickers.
“Check your mail, my love. You have a few messages.”
Best answer:
Answer by Yu
Ha, that’s awesome! One small detail is you might want to capitalize “Twilight the Movie”, but that’s about it. This is so interesting it’s hilarious 😀 I almost laughed at the end 🙂 Is there software that can actually do that?
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