Q&A: how does my movie story sound?

Question by Josh H: how does my movie story sound?
The story is set billions of years in the future. The sun has the reached extinction and transportation for an alternative planet must be set. The humans immediately travel on a huge ship which is capable for supporting the entire human population. The rooms are divided based on countires and divided into further sub sections. On the way there, many humans imagine what life will be over there. Among these is Will and his wife and kids, they’re from the USA. After arriving at the planet, a huge intercom plays stating how the planet they’re in, is known for its harsh conditions. The intercom asks for the women and kids to stay inside as the ship can support it, but asks all men to step out. As soon as the men step outside, they head towards a tunnel and set ground but a huge lightning bolt strikes the ship killing everyone. The men then move along using their navigtional guides hoping to find some sort of civilization. On their journey more and more men die. When reaching head quarters, a huge intercom plays and a male voice plays saying how he will make sure that all humanity dies as they’re all filth. The humans enocunter more and more obstalces. In the end, it is revealed how the main villain was actually a human who dispatched to the planet a few years before not wanting to struggle as much as the others. The rest of the movie is about who wins the war.

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Answer by Alan
good i like it

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