Q&A: Would this be Funny for a drama commercial skit?

Question by Rosie <3: Would this be Funny for a drama commercial skit?
-Hair Piece Commercial-

Script:

Hello! Thanks for tuning into HSN’S special Product of the day. Boy Ladies’ to we have a product your gonna love!! (Pause) are you tired of those bad hair days where you just wanna Hide? met too. and That’s why the People here at HSN are bringing you The “Hair saver!”

and what’s so great about this is you can put it in your hair In seconds and you have a wonderful Hairstyle!!
but you better get them FAST cause were not selling this Item for one thousend dollars, not even Five hundred dollars!! were selling this item for four Ninety Nine Ninety Nine!! and with that price you can buy it for your whole Family!! even your Bald dad!

so hurry up and call NOW!!!!

That’s not all of the commercial but that’s like
the start of it. Please don’t be mean I wrote it myself
BTW, it’s funnier when I actually do it cause my hair piece is all frizzy and messy and I get like really dermatic but anyway.. yeah it’s better in PERSON

Best answer:

Answer by abx gal
Nice, but not that funny. Maybe in the skit u shouild demonstrate it on someone and make there hair look all frizzy

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